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Better Business Writing
by Hilary Phillips

Am I the only one who feels the volume of words I'm expected to assimilate on a daily basis is spiralling out of control? Radio and TV shout at me constantly. Papers, magazines and journals thud on the mat, each with a guilt-tag of "paid for that, must read it." The bin-able junk-mail that lands alongside hasn't a hope as it can be sent straight for recycling without a qualm. And that's not to mention the burgeoning World Wide Web, where there's now said to be more pages than people on the planet! Or the size of Sunday papers! And is it just my imagination that people even talk faster than they used to? Think Sir Winston Churchill and you'll see what I mean.

So how do you get your writing noticed in amongst that lot? Sadly volume of writing doesn't mean quality, but it does create a level of white noise that makes it difficult for your audience to concentrate. So it can be seriously hard work to get an important message read and understood in the age of information overload.

It's time to put yourself in your reader's shoes, behind their desk, with their known or imagined set of distractions, and come up with the persuasive letter, the report or proposal that will make some impact. How do you do it?

Learning to focus on the thinking and planning stages of writing is a vital step in the process, and one that doesn't depend on how well you write, or what marks you got for English at school. This is stuff you can learn and it will make a very significant difference whether you are writing a letter of application for a job, a marketing leaflet or the company annual report.

1. Think
There is a tendency to wade straight into the writing of long complex documents without a clear sense of purpose or audience. Ask a few obvious questions to help clarify the right approach. What am I trying to achieve? What key arguments need to be presented? What will be the most attractive benefits of my proposal to the reader? Sort out this kind of basic information in your head or in note form first. At this stage you can ignore the distracting process of looking up the thesaurus or running your work through the spell-checker and focus on your ideas.

Make sure you have got those unique creative thoughts properly crystallised before you commit to writing even a first draft. Remember that pen and paper can be a great aid to thinking; but if you are scribbling ideas as fast as they come, that's for your eyes only. It's not the final version!

2. Plan
Structure is enormously important when it comes to writing anything longer than a 5-sentence email. Busy people want to be able to understand what they are reading within an incredibly short space of time, so organising content and arguments so that your core message is immediately apparent becomes essential. A clear table of contents, a fabulous executive summary and a logical order for the rest of the document will see you well on the way.

3. Write
With the thinking and planning in place, there is far less risk of staring hopelessly at your blank computer screen when you come to the core activity of stringing the sentences together. Make decisions at the start about the style, tone and voice that suit the purpose of your writing. Practice over a paragraph or two and then be consistent.

What are the current conventions on style that will make your report acceptable in the boardroom? Are the casual tones and sloppy spelling that we use in e-mail transferable to the posh proposal? Caution is important here, as people vary widely in their attitude towards a relaxed approach. If you know your audience, you can choose a style to suit. Otherwise, the best advice is to write the clearest, most correct English you can manage. Always check the spelling and get someone else to read it over for those invisible typos that you can't spot in your own work.

Short sentences are less risky than long. Paragraphs can vary in length, but should be logical. Ask yourself if you could easily give a paragraph a heading. If you can, you've probably got it about right. Use bullet points to break up dense writing.

It is worth paying particular attention to opening sentences, summaries, illustrations and lists of key benefits. Try to work out which elements of your letter or report are going to be important sources of information for your reader and focus extra attention to make sure these sections are accurate, consistent and complete.

4. Review
Once you have a draft on paper you have an opportunity to review your work. Go back to your thinking and planning stages and ask if you have succeeded in meeting the stated purpose of the document. It might be a very elegant piece of writing, but if its off course the effort could still be wasted.

Remember to review the content and the structure as well as the words you've chosen. All too often when you ask someone to review a piece of writing they'll comment on punctuation and possibly sentence construction, but fail to ask the core questions regarding content, structure and style. Are there missing links in your argument or key information that you've omitted? It's always harder to identify that kind of missing detail, than comment on what is already on paper.

Finally, try and approach what you have written from your reader's perspective. Have you answered their sarcastic questions? Have you supplied the right level of background information? Most importantly, have to

I have found that the think-plan-write-review pattern holds good across a whole range of writing, from technical manuals for computer software to soft-sell mood pieces for marketing literature. It's a routine that involves a certain time commitment, but it avoids the twin dangers of writers block and an end product that is selling apples instead of pears. With a bit of practice you may even be able to do the thinking and planning stages at the gym or when you take the dog out.

People are sometimes surprised that they can't just write the way they talk and fail to make allowances for the extra time involved in planning and structuring a piece of written material, writing and rewriting until it is fit for the intended purpose. Without the two-way interaction and immediate feedback that you get in a conversation, the words have to work doubly hard to be effective, and hold the readers interest, right to the last full-stop.

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